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Telegraphic Transmission
we watched snow fall together
and we probably didn't need to say anything
because it was redundant
but words were comfortable
like blankets from the cold
the car ride home
felt like rain
in unexpected deserts
my feelings and thoughts
are starting to communicate
telegraphically
_ . . _ . . . _ _ _ _
( D R E A M )
and when I wake
sometimes I don't care
that the fire in my chest
is growing
I've correctly intepreted this feeling
as nothing more than a Communist plot
to subversively make men feel
that there's something more
to life than sex
no
what more could I want?
I ask
as telegraphic friction
turns evenings to nights
nights to morns
mist to frost
dew to rain
and rain to snow
blowing around
inverted snowglobe
of my internal life
blanketed and cozy
surreptitious transmissions
escaping my chest
coded in mundane
(yet comfortable)
words
rhythmically repeating
. _ . _ . _ . _
to a unison sleep
familiar foreign dream
echoing in decay
electric mechanical heartbeats
and we probably didn't need to say anything
because it was redundant
but words were comfortable
like blankets from the cold
the car ride home
felt like rain
in unexpected deserts
my feelings and thoughts
are starting to communicate
telegraphically
_ . . _ . . . _ _ _ _
( D R E A M )
and when I wake
sometimes I don't care
that the fire in my chest
is growing
I've correctly intepreted this feeling
as nothing more than a Communist plot
to subversively make men feel
that there's something more
to life than sex
what more could I want?
as telegraphic friction
turns evenings to nights
nights to morns
mist to frost
dew to rain
and rain to snow
blowing around
inverted snowglobe
of my internal life
blanketed and cozy
surreptitious transmissions
escaping my chest
coded in mundane
(yet comfortable)
words
rhythmically repeating
. _ . _ . _ . _
to a unison sleep
familiar foreign dream
echoing in decay
electric mechanical heartbeats
1 Comments:
gosh, you're prolific.
i'm working on two short stories right now, but summer classes (community service) has kicked in and the heat is nigh unbearable. It does NOT do wonders for creative concentration.
the communist plot part made me laugh.
I don't really get the (D R E A M) part. Is it a formalistic insertion? something that breaks the static friction?
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